The Man in the Bowler Hat
I am the unnoticed, the unnoticeable man:
The man who sat on your right in the morning train:
The man you looked through like a windowpane:
The man who was the colour of the carriage, the colour of the mounting
Morning pipe smoke.I am the man too busy with a living to live,
Too hurried and worried to see and smell and touch:
The man who is patient too long and obeys too much
And wishes too often and seldom.I am the man they call the nation’s backbone,
Who am boneless – playable catgut, pliable clay:
The Man they label Little lest one day
I dare to grow.I am the rails on which the moment passes,
The megaphone for many words and voices:
I am graph, diagram,
Composite face.I am the led, the easily-fed,
The tool, the not-quite-fool,
The would-be-safe-and-sound,
The uncomplaining bound,
The dust fine-ground,
Stone-for-a-statue waveworn pebble-round.
We start our celebration with one of Tessimond’s most famous poems. Ironic perhaps that he should be noticed for a poem about not being noticed. It is a skilful piece that plays with everyday mundane expression against vaguer, loftier ideas. Notice the repetition: ‘The man’ ‘The man’ ‘The man’; in part it delivers to us the rhythm of the morning train, but also it is the wallpaper repetition of this figure, the hundreds of him filling every carriage, every morning. The past tense of this opening is playful; ‘The man who was the colour of the carriage’, we are informed. We are invited to remember him, to remember the colour of the carriage, but we are not given to recalling minor details.
It is an Everyman poem. This is Magritte’s faceless, bowler-hatted figure who represents all of us, here in our uniform failings:
I am the man too busy with a living to live,
Too hurried and worried to see and smell and touch:
The man who is patient too long and obeys too much
And wishes too often and seldom.
It is the irony of his situation that is moving; there is no escape for the man in the bowler hat from living this way because it is his life. In a sense it is a commonplace idea; ‘too busy with living to live’ is a phrase that we’re perfectly likely to overhear someone say upon the train, but the final line of that stanza: ‘And wishes too often and seldom’ is more enigmatic. The pathos of David Brent’s character in The Office often came from the fact that he did have dreams, but they were the wrong sort of dreams. There is perhaps an element of that same thing in this; Johnson’s Vanity of Human Wishes is here; what we really need, and should hope for, is not the things that we actually desire in life.
We pity this man, don’t we? ‘Too hurried and worried to see and smell and touch’, that is something we feel pity for. Though I am not sure if this man feels pity for it himself. The tone throughout is somewhat matter-of-fact, accepting of his lot, and the only times that a note of bitterness encroaches in the poem is when he resents the fact that he is not more successful in his working life:
[…] playable catgut, pliable clay:
The Man they label Little lest one day
I dare to grow.
Here ‘man’ takes a capital M for the first and only time in the poem. That might indicate the Everyman nature of the term, this is Man against the much larger Gods of business who shape him out of clay perhaps; but that it happens here and not elsewhere in the poem is significant. The capitalisation adds a new stress to the word indicating the narrator’s resentment of his position; we spit the word out because of it. ‘Little’ is also capitalised, and we are invited to draw the two words together, form the insult for ourselves: call him a Little Man.
In this stanza, the ‘nation’s backbone’ stops being a term of praise and becomes a somewhat loaded insult – ‘Who am boneless’ – it is a really terrifically crafted phrase. That Tessimond selects the ‘am’ form of ‘be’ here (and not ‘is’), creates the astonishing impression of this man’s entire Being is formed of ‘bonelessness’. When we read it, it sounds unsophisticated, primitive; almost as if early man was wearing bowler hats inside his caves, but despite its grammatical clumsiness it does its job, which of course is what the man in the bowler hat is there to do.
I don’t wish to say too much about the rest; in a sense it is the immediacy of his poetry that is profound. We all understand what this is saying, we all perhaps feel, or fear, the sentiments of The Man. Let us just pause over the last line before we close however; the image of the ‘Stone-for-a-statue waveworn pebble-round.’
The lack of punctuation here, the hyphenation of the first four words, all contribute in producing the smoothness of this stone in the physical form of the poem. The edges are brushed off by it. In another of Tessimond’s poems, ‘Invitation to the Dance’, he writes:
Enough, my brain, of these circles, circles.
Cease caged enemy, cease.
Others have thought these thoughts before you.
Peace, brain; peace.It has all been written in books, and better.
Come let the tidal sweep
Of the music run through our veins’ slow delta.
(Sleep, brain; sleep.)
That idea of it all having ‘been written in books, and better.’ Of thoughts running in circles that are repeated through the ages, is prevalent in his work. It is that sense of permanence mentioned yesterday; some thoughts remain, others are cast aside. Here perhaps we are hearing the thoughts of Thomas Gray’s Elegy recycled again, that beneath any of the gravestones in the country churchyard, a potential Milton or a Cromwell might lay buried. For Tessimond, any stone might achieve the form of a statue if it is not worn ‘pebble-round’ by the world.
Permanence also comes in the form of the statue. Man strives to be permanent in the world, and that is perhaps his failing. In his poem ‘The Pathetic Fallacy’ Tessimond condemns man’s desire to ‘perpetrate / Magnification of himself / In iron and steel’. It is not the act of building that is at fault but the desire of man to magnify himself. It is the man in the bowler hat’s (cautious) desire also, to one day ‘dare to grow’.
Pebbles are perhaps less noticeable that statues, but they are often more pleasing.
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